An artists greatest accomplishments arise from critiques and constructive criticism. Below is my artwork. I hope you take the time to write what you think... honestly... so I can improve my art for my portfolio. Please remember, it doesn't help if you are just being nice. I am not afraid of your remarks and will not be offended if you don't like one of my pieces. Please be as honest as possible. It is only through your critiques that I can improve.
I like this one. Had me confused at first because of the title, Ascention. When I first looked, I found myself looking down into a a long corridor that had a bright light at the end. A top down view. Then a few seconds passed and my mind shifted to a top upward viewpoint, where I was in a dark tunnel looking upward into the light. I was wanting to rise up and see what was in the light. So it worked for me in this way. But it took a second for me to ascend instead of descend.
At first glance I thought the pillars were holding up a white platform but after I interpreted the title I thought it was clear what you are portraying.
Babe, I think the previous two comments are exactly what Brent Barson was talking about with your pieces being able to be interpreted differently depending on the person looking at them and how you kinda-know-what-you're-looking-at-but-is-that-really-what-it-is... its a keeper :)
I like this one. Had me confused at first because of the title, Ascention. When I first looked, I found myself looking down into a a long corridor that had a bright light at the end. A top down view. Then a few seconds passed and my mind shifted to a top upward viewpoint, where I was in a dark tunnel looking upward into the light. I was wanting to rise up and see what was in the light. So it worked for me in this way. But it took a second for me to ascend instead of descend.
ReplyDeleteAt first glance I thought the pillars were holding up a white platform but after I interpreted the title I thought it was clear what you are portraying.
ReplyDeleteBabe, I think the previous two comments are exactly what Brent Barson was talking about with your pieces being able to be interpreted differently depending on the person looking at them and how you kinda-know-what-you're-looking-at-but-is-that-really-what-it-is... its a keeper :)
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